Once upon a time there was a shiny white horse.He lived on big snowy mountains where he blended in with the snow.This horse could run faster than any living thing on earth.But he was always sad because he ran so fast that no one could keep up with him, so he had no friends.He was very sad and lonely because he had no one to play with.One day he promised everyone that he wouldn’t run as fast as he normally would,so the other animals let him play with them.
What am i learning?
I am learning to write a short story with as much description as possible.
How does this work show my learning?
Because i have managed to describe the character, where he lived, and how he felt in only six sentence's.
What am i wondering?
I am wondering how to do the same thing but with less sentence's.
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