5th November
WALT: Identify and recognise ideas for our 'Risk or Challenge' creative writing task, as well as the physical sensations associated with it
Ideas for R or C
- Camp activities - The Z wire, rope exercise
- Sports - competitions, tournaments
- Project K, hiking, rock climbing, being in the dark
- An abandon house
- Being in the army
- Getting chased
- Doing a speech
Physical Sensations
- Sweat - palms, feet, back, forehead, backside, back of neck, armpits, nose, upper lips, back of knees
- Knees weak/shake
- Need to go to the bathroom
- Heavy breathing
- Looking around a lot/walking back and forth
- Leg bounce
- Pins and needles
- Heart pounding/racing/bursting
- Butterflies in the stomach - blood drop - fluttering
Some great descriptive bits to this writing, Ashley. I liked you used the semi-colon and the 5 sense :) Your next steps would be to fix up the tense, as you jump from past to present to past, and some punctuation, too :)
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